Kendrick Lamar planned visually his Grammy performance accordingly to give his audience a lasting impression on his view of racial divides and police brutality. It introduce his audience in to his realm of thought, he likes to call "Kendrick" was to march out on to the stage as a chain gang with his background performers and rap his first part of his show. Clearly he approaches racial issue as a evident issue, therefore he referred to his internal bondage as like a chain gang member. This visual tie hits the heart, especially elderly members of the African American community because they have parents that have experienced, heard about it, or experienced it themselves. While bold, it also proves that Kendrick's mood might be set at taking aim at the evils of the racial tensions, referring back the days of pure cruelty. Kendrick's transitions his tactical schema into more of remembrance of the beauty rather than the bleak picture of African American history. As he goes into rapping his song "Alright" the scene is of an campfire setting, maybe referring to how slaves would gather around singing spirituals. His wisdom of pairing the song and comparing to a Negro spiritual is rather correct because "Alright" has garnered so much attention over the past year that it has become the chant for the young BLM movement. He ends it of with the picture of Compton in the middle of the continent of Africa which symbolizes that he and those that agree with his message have not forgotten who they are, and it is not possible for him and supporters of the BLM movement to back down cause the work of those that have paved the way for the present generation will not go in vain.
A Rhetorical Movement Analysis: Civil Rights and Black Lives Matter
Monday, February 29, 2016
Visual and Stylistic Elements of Nina Simone "I Wish I Knew"
Knowing she had to capture the full attention of her audience, Nina Simone elevated the meanings of her lyrics, painting the picture of how to be trapped while still envisioning what true freedom might be like. Her picture begins when she states "I wish I knew how it would feel to be free, I wish I could break all the chains holdin' me." She wants to start the song of bleak in that way she transitions the picture into, but with her in captivity can already make the audience feel for her because she can't not possibly be happy with her situation. Pulling their heart strings even more, she goes on "I wish I could share all the love that's in my heart, remove all the bars that keep us apart." She now took her despair and turned it into hope, which lightens the rather dim picture slightly. Her audience, if still compelled to read more, they will read " I wish I could live like I'm longing to live, I wish I could do all the things that I can do." This couple of lines build for the highlight of her image she is creating because now she connects her "chains" as a hindrance or blockage placed on her by another force. This gives the audience even more reason to continue to listen to her song because the suspense for shinning moment. And then she sings " I'd know how it feels, I'd know how it feels to be free." SO the image explains that if only this force that put a hold on Nina was ridden of, she would then know what it was like to be free. And the motion of the her lyrics as a forward progress of what was and what she hopes becomes resembles a similar movement of message during her day: The Civil Rights Movement. For this reason, Nina Simone exemplified great authorial style to enhance her claim for just and equality for all minorities.
Logos: Kendrick Lamar
Lamar's next sequence is him performing his song, "Alright" in front of a fire with people doing what appears to be African traditional dances. This makes the audience think about their roots and also makes non-minorities think of where the African Americans came from as well.
Ending his performance with the map of Africa and "Compton" written inside is done I believe to bring all African Americans together. I believe it reminds people that even if you're a first generation African or a African American with family from the U.S., we are all seen as black in the eyes of non-minorities. This makes people think that we as a black community need to stand together and fight for each other, not divide ourselves.
-Kumam B. Khasar
Friday, February 26, 2016
Logos of Nina Simone “I Wish I Knew”
The arguments that “all men are created equal” ad are therefore endowed with certain “unalienable rights,” comes from the most famous and influential text in the United States history, the Declaration of Independence. The interpretation the most famous line “all men are created equal,” has changed over years. The discussion being, whether the founding fathers meant only white men with property were all created equally or all men spanning all races. The Civil Rights movement uses the phrase to mean all races. Nina Simone incorporates this argument in “I Wish I Knew.”
“I wish I could share
All the love that's in my heart
Remove all the bars
That keep us apart
I wish you could know
What it means to be me
Then you'd see and agree
That every man should be free”
This verse reasons that if everyone knew what it was like to not be free, if white men went through the same suffrages as black Americans, then they would see that all men should be free. Those who opposed the Civil Rights movement had not walked a mile in her shoes. They did not understand the pain of having restricted rights and freedoms. The way Simone presents her argument that all people should know what it’s like to be free is not direct. She does it through talking about dreams and by saying that if she was free could give so much more to society. This method of logos is the strongest one. If someone wants to be free only to make the world a better place and contribute, then why would they deny them their freedom. Creative stifling by the government was often a large issue for Simone, one of her songs even banned from being played on the radio.
Simone’s plea to feel free seems like a simple request. One that not only follows in line with the Declaration of Independence but seems morally correct. Despite all this, many lawmakers did not see the truth in her argument. It was easy for them to plug their ears and shut off their minds in order to ignore the validity of arguments presented to them in defense of the Civil Rights Movement.
-Shannon
-Shannon
Pathos in I Wish I Knew How It Would Feel to Be Free
This lovely song by Nina Simone expresses the freedom desired by the the African American Race. It wasn't that people didn't have rights or were enslaved, but it's that there was discrimination and unequal rights. The use of wish instead of something such as want shows that this wish is something that may be hard to attain. This is very representative of how African Americans felt in their pursuit of being treated equally. It is the same way that Martin Luther King used the phrase "I have a dream" in his speech of his dream to have equal rights for all people. Today, I feel as though people speak about the different minority issues. It seems as though instead of issues coming to a halt, they seem to be increasing. This pushes the desire to be equal further away. If the song was listened to, today, I believe it would have the same effect it did in the past. It would make people feel saddened and maybe even raise confusion of why it is so difficult for everyone to be treated equally. That feeling would push people even harder towards their goal of actually ttaining equal treatment.
-Kumam B. Khasar
-Kumam B. Khasar
Pathos & Kendrick Lamar
Kendrick Lamar gave the performance of the year with his Grammy performance of his two hits, "The Blacker the Berry" and "Alright". His performance evoked many emotions from the audience especially pride and a sense of belonging/connection. He touched on different issues such as mass incarceration, coming out handcuffs and having the jail cells in the background. This opening and him breaking his handcuffs reminds people of the unfairness we face with the criminal justice system. Also, the breaking of his handcuffs could be seen as him showing the freedom desired from his fellow black brothers. The next setting has shows a fire and people dancing in what seemed to me, an African traditional dance. This gesture reminds the African American people of their roots. To end his performance, a map of Africa is shown with 'Compton' written on it (seen in our post on Ethos). I believe this showed that we all, come from Africa and we are all united and there's no difference whether you're, let's say, a first generation African or an African American.
You can also feel the passion he feels about the different issues we have in the black society. I believe that Lamar wanted to not only display issues we face as an African American in society, but also make people feel a sense of pride.
One thing that was really interesting is that one of his lines from his song was muted. I believe the line was: And we hate Popo, wanna kill us dead in the street for sure. This was a shocker, because usually things are muted if there's explicit language, and clearly there was none in this line. Silence shows that there is something to hide. This makes me, personally, makes me a bit irritated. What are the Grammy producers trying to hide? Lamar shows no shame in his lyrics nor his performance, he wasn't scared, but proud. They should also should let him be himself, uncensored and unapologetic.
-Kumam B. Khasar
Ethos in Nina Simone "I Wish I Knew (How It Would Feel To Be Free)"
In Nina Simone's ballad, she wanted her audience to feel a deeper connection to the feeling of the struggles of many blacks of her time. In order to do this, she had to exude both a great deal of external and internal ethos to establish a great connection with her audience. Her internal ethos as an artist is one of deep concern and humanistic motivator. You can tell this by the lyrics in her song, such as " I wish I could share, All the love in my heart." She also states "I wish I could break, All the chains holdin' me." which alludes to her more sincere, thoughtful personality that although not aggressive in nature, is concern about something. This lures the audience to listen more to the song as it goes because they want to know what could be making her upset. The build up of her ethos finally climax's at the point where she says "Then I'd sing cause I'd know yeah, And I'd sing cause I'd know yeah". The audience at this point must realize that both her internal and external ethos is agreement with fighting for some change that has not yet received yet because she would have declared it already. If the audience goes ahead to read more about her story after the song they might get a better understanding of what she is fighting for based on her race and the time period alone: equal and just laws for African Americans. Nina Simone did a great job and thinking out how she wanted to be represented in front of her audience. Someone with motives but not critical in her delivery, which elevated her performance that much greater.
-Okeze
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